I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi danielle.Your creature looks amazing.The way you drew it really amazed me.My question is what creature is it?.Did you make it up or used diffrent creature body parts?.
Kia ora Danielle, wow what an amazing mini beast! The colour scheme you used is beautifully balanced, using the faded tones of grey and cream. The shapes you placed on the body are striking and add a magical touch to your design. The hint of sea green for the eye gives your image a pop of colour that lifts the other colours. Great thinking to sign your art with your name on the wing, this makes your work look super professional and lets the audience know who created this wonderful piece of art. You used your creativity and design knowledge very well. Thank you for posting your mahi this week.
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Hi danielle.Your creature looks amazing.The way you drew it really amazed me.My question is what creature is it?.Did you make it up or used diffrent creature body parts?.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Danielle, wow what an amazing mini beast! The colour scheme you used is beautifully balanced, using the faded tones of grey and cream. The shapes you placed on the body are striking and add a magical touch to your design. The hint of sea green for the eye gives your image a pop of colour that lifts the other colours. Great thinking to sign your art with your name on the wing, this makes your work look super professional and lets the audience know who created this wonderful piece of art. You used your creativity and design knowledge very well. Thank you for posting your mahi this week.
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