I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Danielle, this is a delicious story. I love that the hair almost has character - a personality - it's twirly, curly straight and EVEN KNOTTY. I like that the character goes to the hairdresser. I would like to know what happened to the hair???? Did it like its haircut?
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Danielle, this is a delicious story. I love that the hair almost has character - a personality - it's twirly, curly straight and EVEN KNOTTY. I like that the character goes to the hairdresser. I would like to know what happened to the hair???? Did it like its haircut?
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wow nice hairdo story can't wait for part 3!!
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Deleteyou should do a part 3 because I like your story so much
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ReplyDeleteCan you do a part 3 please because your story is so good.
From Frances
I love the way you did it Danielle
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ReplyDeleteWow I really want to know what happend.My face went like this when Jessica was in a black room.-> :-0
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