I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Danielle, This is such a great "song" that you did and I like the colors you chose for the background! but you forgot a lyric "Tryna find my way back home for you" that is how it goes but great job anyway
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Hi Danielle,
ReplyDeleteThis is such a great "song" that you did and I like the colors you chose for the background! but you forgot a lyric "Tryna find my way back home for you" that is how it goes but great job anyway
Ok, Thanks!
DeleteYour welcome!
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