I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Always so interesting to read your blog posts Danielle. You used personification so well in your Hair Story - the hair is the character you were writing about - I would love to see more of your stories where you use personification.
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good work danielle I can see this is really new to your blog my favrite part was when you said go bananas moe I really liked reading it good job
ReplyDeleteoh bananas moe is gonna be in next Story :)
Deleteyou should definitely do a prat 2
ReplyDeleteOk Part or "brat" spelled wrong?
DeleteAlways so interesting to read your blog posts Danielle. You used personification so well in your Hair Story - the hair is the character you were writing about - I would love to see more of your stories where you use personification.
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