I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great start Danielle! I enjoyed reading how yellow reminds you of sunflowers, and how that it connects to being outstanding. I was interested to hear more about Queenstown and those snowy mountains, maybe next time you could aim to write a paragraph. Great work setting out your maths thinking, I could read the patterns you discovered. Did you have a go figuring out the totals? Keep up the fantastic work!
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Great start Danielle! I enjoyed reading how yellow reminds you of sunflowers, and how that it connects to being outstanding. I was interested to hear more about Queenstown and those snowy mountains, maybe next time you could aim to write a paragraph. Great work setting out your maths thinking, I could read the patterns you discovered. Did you have a go figuring out the totals? Keep up the fantastic work!
ReplyDeleteHello Danielle Its me Nicholas, I really liked your wordsearch, maybe next time you could show us the words we are supposed to be looking for.
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