I am a Year 5 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in KHH and my teacher is Whaea Sharlee and Whaea Tamzin. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Such a thoughtful story Danielle - I love how you have used your text choices, such as HORROR, to add tension to this fast-fiction piece. If you had to give your character another problem to solve, what would the next problem be?
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Such a thoughtful story Danielle - I love how you have used your text choices, such as HORROR, to add tension to this fast-fiction piece. If you had to give your character another problem to solve, what would the next problem be?
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